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		<title>Comment on Chocolate Milkshake Review #1 &#8211; M&amp;S Chocolate Flavoured Milk Milkshake by rhys</title>
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		<dc:creator>rhys</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 09 May 2011 13:33:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>hey</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>hey</p>
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		<title>Comment on What I Did Today (three days ago) by Methodize</title>
		<link>http://www.themoonunderground.com/2011/04/what-i-did-today-three-days-ago/comment-page-1/#comment-679</link>
		<dc:creator>Methodize</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 02 Apr 2011 00:46:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Never bothered with the lands end myself... You&#039;ve made me proud!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Never bothered with the lands end myself&#8230; You&#8217;ve made me proud!</p>
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		<title>Comment on What I Did Today (three days ago) by Methodize</title>
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		<dc:creator>Methodize</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 02 Apr 2011 00:45:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Awesome write-up.

4 hours in that field? gosh. 25 years is not bad going, though.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Awesome write-up.</p>
<p>4 hours in that field? gosh. 25 years is not bad going, though.</p>
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		<title>Comment on What I Did Today by Richard</title>
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		<dc:creator>Richard</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 01 Dec 2010 15:22:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>it was accidental yes. I think gastropods are probably lacking enough solid matter to be able to &quot;leather up&quot; effectively. I have also found a leathery rat in the past and it was very light, crispy and strangely triangular in cross section.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>it was accidental yes. I think gastropods are probably lacking enough solid matter to be able to &#8220;leather up&#8221; effectively. I have also found a leathery rat in the past and it was very light, crispy and strangely triangular in cross section.</p>
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		<title>Comment on What I Did Today by Methodize</title>
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		<dc:creator>Methodize</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Nov 2010 23:20:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>That remains ambiguous.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>That remains ambiguous.</p>
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		<title>Comment on What I Did Today by Methodize</title>
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		<dc:creator>Methodize</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Nov 2010 23:19:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I picked up a dead rat once while stacking wood. It was very light, badly decomposed, and leathery. What might the gastropod equivalent be? And was your horror story of an accidental occurrence as was mine?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I picked up a dead rat once while stacking wood. It was very light, badly decomposed, and leathery. What might the gastropod equivalent be? And was your horror story of an accidental occurrence as was mine?</p>
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		<title>Comment on Graphic Comic Update by Another Graphic Comic Update &#171; The Moon Underground</title>
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		<dc:creator>Another Graphic Comic Update &#171; The Moon Underground</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 01 Sep 2010 16:56:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] then it is actually like it&#8217;s a proper work in progress kind of update. To see my last update look here. Or look just down. I hear that linking to past stuff in your blog is good for your blog. Probably [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] then it is actually like it&#8217;s a proper work in progress kind of update. To see my last update look here. Or look just down. I hear that linking to past stuff in your blog is good for your blog. Probably [...]</p>
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		<title>Comment on Top Of Google Page Two You Losers! by Arvind Shah</title>
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		<dc:creator>Arvind Shah</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 04 Jul 2010 14:56:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Richard, and congratulations for achieving this important milestone! :-D

Why don&#039;t you create a post with the title &quot;Richard Swan&quot;. To see how that does?

/Arvind</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Richard, and congratulations for achieving this important milestone! <img src='http://www.themoonunderground.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif' alt=':-D' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>Why don&#8217;t you create a post with the title &#8220;Richard Swan&#8221;. To see how that does?</p>
<p>/Arvind</p>
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		<title>Comment on Content Content Content by Methodize</title>
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		<dc:creator>Methodize</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 25 Mar 2010 01:55:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Feeling it.

What keywords are you targeting brau?

....mkay, you&#039;re targeting &#039;The moon underground - picture books by Richard Swan&#039; - which is basically lousy. Reads nicely, but a page title really does need to be of use to Google too.

You need to pack useful, but not too competitive keywords in there. And as you seem to have noticed, dropping the Richard Swan targeting might not hurt; you&#039;re only going to get misguided traffic for a while yet from that keyword.

Concentrate on the stuff that tentative readers might search for in google, that do not already know you. Be more descriptive/specific.

Then make sure you&#039;ve filed everything perfectly with google. And bing, if you give a huff.

And while the list does go on and on, Google has never been happy about landing pages like yours. That is why your main website listing in google has only &#039;Enter&#039; in the subtext. You need an actual body of keyword-rich text there, on your very first page, if you want to play the SEO game.

That said, I was enthusiastically trying to show your site to my wifey, not least of all because I did enjoy the textless design, and thought she might too!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Feeling it.</p>
<p>What keywords are you targeting brau?</p>
<p>&#8230;.mkay, you&#8217;re targeting &#8216;The moon underground &#8211; picture books by Richard Swan&#8217; &#8211; which is basically lousy. Reads nicely, but a page title really does need to be of use to Google too.</p>
<p>You need to pack useful, but not too competitive keywords in there. And as you seem to have noticed, dropping the Richard Swan targeting might not hurt; you&#8217;re only going to get misguided traffic for a while yet from that keyword.</p>
<p>Concentrate on the stuff that tentative readers might search for in google, that do not already know you. Be more descriptive/specific.</p>
<p>Then make sure you&#8217;ve filed everything perfectly with google. And bing, if you give a huff.</p>
<p>And while the list does go on and on, Google has never been happy about landing pages like yours. That is why your main website listing in google has only &#8216;Enter&#8217; in the subtext. You need an actual body of keyword-rich text there, on your very first page, if you want to play the SEO game.</p>
<p>That said, I was enthusiastically trying to show your site to my wifey, not least of all because I did enjoy the textless design, and thought she might too!</p>
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